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Run

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I want to run
But the walls encage me.
The midnight shroud's tormenting work is done
And my blood-stained eyes waver but cannot see.

I want to run away
But the padlock is bound.
The demons that hover opress me to stay
And my tortured lips dare not make a sound.

I want to run far away now
But the ominous Wrath screams.
No, I must soar high! Let me by eternal vow:
To steal a sip of euphoria from Apollo's stream.

Oh, but soon I be dragged from my mere fantasy wish
Back to this deathly battlefield of infinite despair,
Where silver spears that pelt from charcoal skies never vanish
And from this flood of anguish I suppress, there leaks no tear.

Because I cannot run away,
So here I wait for my soul to decay.
This poem was written in bed one night when I felt pretty sad and annoyed. To be honest, this may well have been the first time I wrote any poem, outside of those primary school days. Inspired by "Run" by Epik High, a song which I had on repeat during the writing of this. Constructive criticism wanted; things I could work on? Thanks :)
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krapyllas's avatar
I love the emotion in this, and the imagery.
Um, as for constructive criticism, you could make the last lines more effective and abject by making it shorter. Meh I don't know, I'm not qualified to criticise XD
The style kind of reminds me of some of the Romantics' poems of the 1800's.